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Page 8 is one of the most accident prone ever!
I did a huge mistake in the clothing of Pharaun and Ryld.
While drawing Rylds I always repeated the mantra 'Must not forget muscle, muscle...." etc to remind myself not
to let him become as skinny as Pharaun.
After I inked to the end I suddenly had the thought, 'hey, isn't Ryld wearing a chestplate?' flips back the previous pages...*Screams*
Unfortunately as I ink by hand, it is not a simple thing as picking up an eraser and rubbing my mistake away.
The answer to this? Pour on more ink and change it into armor!
Pharaun's one I left it alone since I'm actually still adjusting his 'look'.
The text has also been modified from the original since if I
had left it as it is, half the page would be text and nothing else.
So far, I've only covered part of the 1st chapter of Dissolution; it should be over in 2 more pages before we can (finally) move on to the other characters.
The question is...which one? Gromph? Triel? Quenthel? or Greyanna?
I did a huge mistake in the clothing of Pharaun and Ryld.
While drawing Rylds I always repeated the mantra 'Must not forget muscle, muscle...." etc to remind myself not
to let him become as skinny as Pharaun.
After I inked to the end I suddenly had the thought, 'hey, isn't Ryld wearing a chestplate?' flips back the previous pages...*Screams*
Unfortunately as I ink by hand, it is not a simple thing as picking up an eraser and rubbing my mistake away.
The answer to this? Pour on more ink and change it into armor!
Pharaun's one I left it alone since I'm actually still adjusting his 'look'.
The text has also been modified from the original since if I
had left it as it is, half the page would be text and nothing else.
So far, I've only covered part of the 1st chapter of Dissolution; it should be over in 2 more pages before we can (finally) move on to the other characters.
The question is...which one? Gromph? Triel? Quenthel? or Greyanna?
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Glad to see more of these pages, I started reading through the first book again before I bought a copy of His Dark Materials.
One bit thing I noticed is that the last panel with Ryld, the first time a looked at it I thought the bottle had hit him on the shoulder... I think if the movement line were his arm movement instead of the bottle it may help... but that's just my first impression
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In life, I want to be like Switzerland. "Neutral", well-informed, a friend of all and innocent of everything
P.S.: do more Pharauns, please))
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I only blame myself for everything because I'd hate to depend on the world.
*Keep drawing*
I am thrilled every time you come out with a new page! Keep up!
In this one I just love the expressions on their faces. Very drowish. They are "friends", but it's like they don't want to show it to its end and they don't want to trust/appreciate each other for real. Just lovely!
And I like your attention to details!
Especially since you tend to tell me exactly what is it you like about the page.
It helps alot in the planning of future pages
I haven't had the time to try HDM yet but I heard it's a good book.
Oh dear. I was trying for an effect where Ryld kind of snatch the bottle in mid-air. Perhaps I should have strengthen the speed lines on his arms.
Thanks for pointing it out
Unfortunately, its a tie between those two.
There will be, of course, more Pharaun.^^
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